The Boy who escaped from Hell [Part 2] {conclusion}

[Godless]

i Was turning into them
My time was Running out
if i Was to leave this cursed life
The Moment had to Be Now

So i reached in my Heart
To the remaining Good that i Had
And with courage said to the Devil
"You Will NOT Have My heart!"

he arised With Hate and Anger
the earth trembled in his Wrath
and as if to intimidate me
he spoke "You belong to me Now!"

But he cannot scare me now
For this is my Last Stand
And i will not stand to loose
What remained pure in my Heart

For if i did, He would Win
and i would be, just like him
i rather die than hurt others
i rather die than Be Sin

and in Such realisation
My heart emitted a White light
it tore a Hole in the earth
And Formed a path to the sky

Finally, at Long last
I Was to Be Free
and with all my Hope and Will
i ran towards salvation

Never looking Back
Running to save my life
Running to a bright future
Where i Could Dream and Love

And in my last breath
i Closed my Eyes and i leapt
and when i finally woke up
i was The Boy who escaped From Hell

[shinikage]

Nice one, this one seems like the brighter version while the other one seems like darker version. Quite emotional and the story is interesting.

[Godless]

Originally Posted by shinikage

Nice one, this one seems like the brighter version while the other one seems like darker version. Quite emotional and the story is interesting.

Yup, this is the conclusion ^_^

he overcame his hardships and escaped from hell

Btw, this Poem is About an Abusive Parent. and growing up with that kind of Role model and choosing not to be like Him.

[ultimateanimelover101]

great poem!! you misspelled some words here and there but it doesn't really matter..

this is a very emotional and heartfelt poem i can't wait to read more of your poems!

[GnetiS]

Yaaay he made it ^^

Great conclusion, still missing the music but oh well. =)

[Godless]

Originally Posted by ultimateanimelover101

great poem!! you misspelled some words here and there but it doesn't really matter..

this is a very emotional and heartfelt poem i can't wait to read more of your poems!

Thank you ^_^

But which words? point them out, i will fix them..

Originally Posted by GnetiS

Yaaay he made it ^^

Great conclusion, still missing the music but oh well. =)

LOL, i can't put music in them Neti, even if i wanted to..

Both Poems are at my CAP limit :(

[Vezzel]

was this something like "i will act like im like that person just to survive till i can free myself"?
really liked what u r talking on these poems, the way u wrote them and the feelings they show, nice works rok!

PD: awww, only 2 parts? :C
make an OVA of these xD

[Godless]

Originally Posted by Vezzel

was this something like "i will act like im like that person just to survive till i can free myself"?
really liked what u r talking on these poems, the way u wrote them and the feelings they show, nice works rok!

PD: awww, only 2 parts? :C
make an OVA of these xD

Yes, that's one of the Main messages ^_^
i did it to survive..

[Nya]

*munching on bacon* What can i say? In my non-professional opinion (last poem wrote when i was 6) i would have to say.... twas a marvel to read hath thou anymore?!

[Godless]

Originally Posted by Nya

*munching on bacon* What can i say? In my non-professional opinion (last poem wrote when i was 6) i would have to say.... twas a marvel to read hath thou anymore?!

LOL, yes i do, but i decided to spare you from them ^_^

they are older that this one..

But thank you for reading it ^_^