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I enjoyed this one for it is a step away from your other poems. I loved how it ended as well".I have no reason to hate you but more then enough reasons to love you." Very nicely put once again you out did yourself. Thank you for sharing this.
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It's a nice piece but there's one small detail that is probably unimportant as no-one has mentioned yet, but still bugs me. It's an acrostic poem, not an anagram. An anagram is a rearrangement of letters in a word or phrase to form another word or phrase.
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That was a very sweet poem Godless. Keep up your work, and like Loote is saying an anagram is the rearrangement of letters. I honestly expected a thread that was asking that lol.
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but now i do, Thanx
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see, you were correcting the term not the piece.. so that's actually helpful to me..
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